Show dont tell

First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
Second paragraph - describe the behaviour - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
Fourth paragraph  - describe the character's belongings and environment.


Who am i?
She’s covered in black head to toe, Her mask is shinier than diamonds, her tail swings to her beat. She's meows every time she's aiming for someone She moves using her gymnastic moves to move from place to place. She does vicious growls at her victims and often doesn't care about the environment behind her. sometimes she helps others and sometimes she... 


this week we have been doing character description of show dont tell guess who my character is!

The Holidays!

At the the holidays the first place I went was the Water Park it was very fun but the water was freezing and it was very crowded, A day after I went to Whangarei and it was a very quiet city and the rest of the days I had sleepovers with my friends and cousins and had ice cream all day hehe 😆 also the parks there are really fun! I also went to a place with flowers every where in Whangarei My favorite place I went was Nandos