Thursday 24 October 2019

Show dont tell



First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
Second paragraph - describe the behaviour - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
Fourth paragraph  - describe the character's belongings and environment.


Who am i?
She’s covered in black head to toe, Her mask is shinier than diamonds, her tail swings to her beat. She's meows every time she's aiming for someone She moves using her gymnastic moves to move from place to place. She does vicious growls at her victims and often doesn't care about the environment behind her. sometimes she helps others and sometimes she... 


this week we have been doing character description of show dont tell guess who my character is!

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