About to hatch writing

WALT: use adjectives and verbs in my writing

Remember to:

Describe objects (verbs) using like or as (similes)

Describe objects (verbs) as other objects (verbs)

Dont over use similes or metaphors

include adjectives or adverbs - wow words

About to hatch.....

For the last few days, they had been falling from the sky. Nobody knew where they had come from; nobody knew why they were there.

The mysterious objects, most of them spherical in shape, lay there on the beach, motionless, immovable despite the tide’s best efforts to remove them from the shoreline.

Then, a crack began to appear on the surface…

Slowly the crack became Bigger and Bigger. Then it happened that rock split open, everyone was frozen they could have won the Guinness world record mannequin challenge. People were completely speechless instead of an unusual creature it was a rock just a rock but intelligent Doc knew it wasn't an ordinary rock it was a Magic rock, in fact, anyone who has it in there hand makes a wish there wish happens.

People immediately started to try to snatch the rock out of Docs hand, “No stop Right Now” Doc shouted ut everyone ignored the message and carried on snatching it off his hand then Doc knew what to do He wished “Break this rock” But nothing Happened He Repeated “Break This ROCK”, nothing. Then the rock spoke to him you're an intelligent man but your wish won't work if you wish to break the rock just like that. I know you will know what to do said the rock. Doc was Shocked but he knew if a rock can talk anything can happen Immediately He threw the rock to the ground and it shattered into pieces the rock was gone.