Monday 29 April 2019

Holidays!

At the Holidays i went to long bay beach i was there for hours, and hours. one of the things i disliked there was the sea salt water. i liked the warm water and the rocks nearby. Me my sister and my friends built and mermaid and a sandcastle ours looked really similar like this one.

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  1. Hello Sahar. Its me Jack from next door, Room 7. In the holidays I did pretty much nothing and you went to a beach with your family? I wish I was there because it looks good there. Your sisters and You are really good at building things with sand and look at those details on those builds. I like how you told me what you disliked things in that beach but you should really read it again and see if there are some mistakes. If there is just a I by its self make it to a capital I.

    You should look at my blog sometime in this link https://odsjacku.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later
    Jack :D

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  2. Thanks jack for the advice, Ill make sure to check your blog out

    Baiiiiiiii

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  3. Hi Sahar,My name is Zoe from M2 at Greymain School and in the holidays I did something like that but maybe next time you could take pictures of your original sandcastle and mermaid and you could elaborate on how you made the them.
    But I am astounded by the sight of your mermaid Ka Pai!

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